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average.

Although this has all the requirements to be passed, several things bothered me. First of all, this didn't really have much feeling in it. No suspense, no instance of empathy. Secondly, it seemed a tad bit random. I mean sure it's war, you can expect chaos, but the action was sparse and the events didn't fall into any timeline. Thirdly, Plot? Sure the whole reason these men are fighting and dying is to protect their country/ or the contra invade the country, but there is no individual plot; no real substance that draws the watches in but the expectation of violence.

You're a good artist with plenty of skill, just find out how to fill in those criteria.

the numbers:

Graphics: Graphics were good, stick people were okay yet the hands looked a bit botched. I did like the backgrounds.

Style: The style was alright, average at best. Needed improvement on a plot.

Sound: Not that great. There was voice acting, but the ambience developed by the gun fire was unrealistic. The machine gun firing resembled a coffee machine and it really killed the feel.

Violence: war

Interactivity: none. It's a movie

Humor: dude.. it's war

It was good. Needs a little improvement

The animation in this movie was great. However, i couldn't really see much of a storyline, It seemed much like a random haunted house at first, later on perhaps some suggested past is given when the girl looks angryly at the ghost (?). Some sugestions is that you use some sounds to set the mood. Sounds that are chilling or simply just incoherent. voted 3

BADMAN responds:

it is the Truth you speak...
I'm workin on it! :)

Nice.

I have no idea what those chicks are, but they are the cutest things i've ever seen. Anyway, this was imaginative and humorous to some extent. It was very well animated and extreamly smooth on flash standards (wow no tweens). Anyway, does this fit into a storyline or is it some random thing with cool fantasy critters?

Woohhaha.. Nice

This was amazing, the animation was great. Although, I see a deep meaning to this. Well not really. But oh well..

Anyway its like this.. Guy is first off like WOOOO YEAH GOD! BAM BAM BAM! and started owning everyone. But then afterward he was like WHO DA MAN.. So the church squashed him. Yum Irony

At least that's how i see it. Great job.

Hm Alright.

It was pretty good, the fbf was very smooth in comparison to most others. However the sound was at most Annoying. Try doing some more sampling before adding sounds. Otherwise, just try to improve on the smoothness of your lines.

MarcyVF responds:

Thanks 4 reviewing! I will remember it to next time! :)

Hm..

Relatively amusing.. The art was alright. How ever, the whole speaksonia "help me" and "ah" cracked me up due to it's totaly emotionless voice.

=_=

great.. another tracer

S-E5000 responds:

well it was the first and only so stop complainin

Lol!

I CAN UNDERSTAND THEM OMG!

It was alright

It moved a little slow for a stick fighter, the motion seemed to have gaps between it. Try to find a better way to show that the main character is "powering up". Also the dialog is rather.. cheesy. Try using another song as well. Linkin Park is good, but the style of music doesn't match the style of animation.. Try something with a more heavy beat.

lol

Lawl! random!

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